This is such a cool story with an amazing concept that I've honestly never seen before. Kinda reminds me of JJK because of how only a select few can see the spirits. One issue I have is that in one paragraph, it sounds like Shakespeare wrote this and in the next, a random person. Dialogue is amazing, action is pretty good too but you don't need more than one exclamation mark or question mark to make the character seem like he's shouting. Good book tho
