I really like novels with systems. This novel is very good where the protagonist can do anything with the help of the system, and really like the protagonist to have lots of abilities and learn quickly ... I hope this novel can continue, and also if it can be released 1 - 2 chapters. thank you
not sure why this story isnt more popular. one of the better FL stories. strong, smart, funny, cute, and not constantly in need of saving. world(s) are interesting and, while the cultivation/portal setting in not original, there is enough uniqueness to make the story stand out. characters work well together and are fun to read about. there isnt much character growth. mostly becoming comfortable in their own body. but the leads are strong competent adults so not sure they really need to grow. it mostly just fun to see how they will react to changes.no crazy plot armor or last minute saves by the heavens. just competent people accomplishing their missions. which is actually nice compared to every minor outing turning into a world altering cataclysm with diving treasures popping up left and right.plus if nothing else, the mc is a bloodthirsty, cute, wolf girl, who dresses like a pirate. with walking nuke of a mage as partner. that alone should be enough reason to read this.
I really liked the plot of the story it is comical and refreshing.The author has good pacing for this story and the world build-up is also nice. I really liked the bulb line though. hope you continue to publish the book ???
This novel has a lot of potential, i was amazed with gow you start this book Author!!!! Everything is well put together and I'll be reading more of your work????? So keep those chapters coming because I'm hooked.What a determine father??? this world need more men like Matthew!!!!
Armada:" No i mean listen to me! We're in a new city. I'm already walking around a shady alleyway ,I'm still young but got my own unique power! Got about 10 gold in my pockets and so i've got enough money for a while. AND EVEN WORSE! Is the fact that i've got Blue eyes and black hair which is somewhat 'unique or rare'. You know what all this means?! DO YOU?"
