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World of Swords ⚔️
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Writing quality is top notch with just a few mistakes on character names especially the neighbor and mother.  I really wanted to keep reading this, but 100 chapters in and I just see no movement in the plot.  We vaguely have a idea on MCs past life but it is very minimal, and we have no clue what might be the overall goal of the story. The MC has minimal growth with the experiences he has had so far. He has no trust even in his own parents so he just lies to everyone. (the Dr. does get a bit more truth, but he still lies)   Basically I will probably just read the Chapter title and the comments to see if it is worth buying a chapter or to start reading again.
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too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.
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The man has an uniform of a knight with a huge cape which seems to be made out of leather, a sword almost as huge as Naota's body, a huge beard and blue eyes.
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"I'm an exception," she nodded and then stood in front of the bathroom mirrors. "But if you really don't want to tell Chloe your feelings, I won't tell her for you either," she said and checked herself out in the mirror. She messed with her hair, dabbed toilet paper under her eyes and turned around to face me. "Do I look okay enough to go back into our classroom?" she asked.
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"It isn't like that, it just we don't have..." Rio explained when Riza cornered him.
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I hold Rias' head firmly as I glide the tip of my cock on her tongue as I don't stop putting my throbbing cock inside her warm and very hot mouth-pussy of her's
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"Sorry mother, I was tending the garden and rushed without thinking, I'll put it back. What was it that you needed?"
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"Welkom Creator, to your temple, the First Temple! The hight represents your greatness, even though it's an imperfect representation, your greatness has no end! But this tower does, even though we can't see it from here." Then Goba points up to a point high above the ground, there I can see two small rings. "I've spent my time there, hanging there listening to the Temple teaching me about you, about your potential, opening my eyes to how you were even greater than I already thought you were! For you the time we didn't see each other might have looked like minutes, but hanging there under the effect of the Temple, it was days, weeks, probably something close to a month! I've learned a lot about this place, I've learned a lot about you."
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You'll never know if you don't go
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You'll never shine if you don't glow
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I've been enjoying the story. I'm always going to be a fan of stories where the protagonist is african. Similar vibe to "The Greatest Of All Time" which I'm a big fan of. The only issue I'd say I have is that the mom is exhausting sometimes, I can't help but find myself rolling my eyes at some of her over the top reactions. It's not that I don't understand why she's characterised like that I'm just not a fan of her. Hope to see more from the author ?

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