My friends if you want a good novel and a great writer just read this novel and help him. I have the feeling he will be better and this novel is just a start but it feels like he has already skipped a few steps (in a good way)
This novel is great with great imagination and care, you can feel the warmth in every word and feel his hard work.
Bro keep it up, I am a fan of your novel.
Keep getting better and God will bless you with good luck.