Wonder-World - Reviews

Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

How come the author wrote something this brilliant. The chapters are quite long, and plotwise the book is like fire, spreading in the minds of the readers, to read more. love it.

Loving the fact that this story kicks off with a world transfer that doesn't actually involve the main character getting killed. He's an intellectual and that is my favorite type among all main character types. Gonna keep this in my library and hope that it updates regularly.

Good job author!

I normally don’t read gaming novels, but this immersed me inside the novel so quickly I didn’t even notice it. Keep up the good work and good luck!

Interesting story! I like how you put it into detail and give me an image of what's the world MC has in the story.

I hope the author won't drop it and continue updating the story.

I'm not really familiar with or read stories for Male Audiences but this is one of the few that made me go '?' to '!'
Since it's just a few chapters and yet to see anything,
I'd be waiting for the other chapter for the world-building. As for the characters, character description would be most needed for better image of the whole world~
Gambare, Author~

A new interesting novel, even it has a few chapters it's really caught up my attention.

I'd like how you detailed the world and the descriptive words used. Thanks for the new fantasy novel.


Keep it up, Author!

This novel has a good mix of system and action. I gotta say I'm impressed! This kind of writing was scarce as many system novels flooded this site. A cut above the rest to be exact! Nice job of portraying the characters and absolutely one of the best so far that I have read. Good execution of the genre! Kudos and good luck in the future!

Great story you have here, author! I really like the flow, though, it is a little fast, but the plot was so intriguing that it easily draws you to follow the path of the ML  The world background has an interesting design, and I am really liking it. Well done! [img=recommend]

Your story is cool.  It has great potential.  I would suggest to enrich the world-building some more maybe? And maybe the character design as well.  Keep on writing author.  

I was a bit confused at first, but the story line draws you in. Adam seems to be making the best of his situation. Period and comma placement could use some work, but all in all; Great Story! Keep up the good work Author!

I like the dream vision but do you know that dreams can lead to future events and it can also led to understand what can happen in another reality world. Good concept but I got to read more to see what going to happen.