It seems the author is new to this field, but she can keep on improving. From the start, it was already full of events and made you want to read more. However, it is a bit hard to understand what's going on and you have to read it twice on the first few chapters and kind of breaks the flow of the story. I hope the author edits it for a better reading experience. Overall, it's a good story and has plenty of room to improve.
