Wings Of Dawn - Reviews

Let me go by saying I love op mcs and love when they're popular when its done right as for this... I tried to call chief and he told me to go away he already knows. Oh and pretty much every high voted comments in the first 50 chapters are all people hatting on the bad writing and plot so thats a thing.This is a story about a very stereotypical nerd who through the power of plot armor gets verbally s*ucked by every female, teasing girls one second to become a slave through a contract next because a female character talks nice to him, and then throws out his secrets like soup at a soup kitchen._-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-SPOILERS_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-So the main character becomes a blacksmith and is given a unbelievably broken ability and class that hes gonna use to become a real life superman. How you say? A magical ring he randomly finds on the ground that lets him go into a vrmmo can take items from in game to the real world. Sound stupid yet? Well dont worry with all the verbal $uck and very bad characters you wont have any idea whose who for a good 70% of all females. Jokes aside he has a entire guild giving him the verbal $uck and i cant tell the diffrence between any of the named ones besides the one that overly $*xualized and 85% of words have all been something about the mc being attractive.I digress the magic ring has to be upgraded either thru real items or in game items. Yet it can just snatch anything from the mc and force him to be a certain class yet was never given a explanation as to ehy the ring that gives him +20 luck at level 2 A Doesnt make him already super human(seriously he could but 10 lotto tickets and hes gurrented to win but he doesnt) and B why the mc gets stuck in any situation. The mc can literally run 3ms per step. Not second but everytime he moves his legs he jumps 3 meters yet hes as of chapter 58 getting locked down by some thugs who wouldnt be able to touch his coat(yes he has a fat friend but he could easily kill everyone around him by running and punching them in the neck no way he can't destroy everyone present). The next chapter hes being dragged down by 2 idoits and tgeir little sister eho apon seeing the mc has a sploosh as she claims hes KINDA CUTE and fights him. Now because he has SUPERHUMAN SPEED he trips her and could have let her fall cracker her skull but the mc is a good guy(+1) and catches her in the classic kiss pose which she goes in for. Very next chapter mc doesnt run away with his superspeed but some how gotten himself a stalker. Thats where i quit. Mc doesnt like whats going on and can damn near catch a car if he really tries in running but doesnt leave this situation its beyond me

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Greaaaaaat and interesting story for my leisure time, recommend to you guys.................................................................

I have always been a fan of Vampires. And the way you blended it with the setting of one of my favorite anime, AOT, this book, to me, is simply splendid. Keep up the good work!

She open the door and the people inside all look towards her,

Us: Woah.

Do not hurry, let Carl get hurt if there is no farm and there is no maggie

Peter: patay nakulam na ata ang kaibigan natin

And with Riza and Rio are assign to assist injure members in the chaotic battlefield.

Rose: "Yes, it's as close to what I feel coming from you"

If what happened was correct, then that means that I am alive, somehow.