Why Wait for God. I'm Right Here. - Reviews

Heyo!. I like the way you describe the cast and the plot. I like it, so much!.

Enjoying so far, like how the MC is OP as hell. GF needs a little love and development as well, hope that's in the story. I do like the plot and think it will get better, good job to the author.

this is one of those stories that follows a template more often used in Japanese Fantasy stories, one where the transmigrated person realizes he is the boss in a story with a different main character than him. But instead of it playing out in a galge game setting it is in a xianxia setting. The main character is a bit more pro active in finding the 'protagonists' than in Japanese stories and he forms a team to find those 'protagonists' so that he can avoid them or kill them before they become too strong. The problem that I have with these kinds of stories is that inevitably the main character is just as much a 'protagonist' as the 'protagonists' he tries to avoid / kill. I generally only enjoy this type of story when the main character disconnects himself from the story of the 'protagonist' and that is not really happening in this story. Add to that a cultivation ladder that uses metals (even if you use the explanation of the metal type indicates the hardness of the body I don't like it because I think xianxia stories should use levels that have a Daoism flavor) and some other world building choices that I don't like adds up to make me rate this story not that high. This is more a matter of taste than quality of writing bc the story building, characters and conversations are pretty well written.

Great beginning, actually I wanted to read something different from typical cultivation stories and this is great, don’t give up

Love this!!Sure a nice book?♥️??The writer really sat down to think of awesome characters??? it's so niceI love the setting and the fact that it promotes the African culture and traditionsThanks to you Anita you are sure a nice author ?♥️

It wasn't good for Chen Xi to refuse again, and a strange thought couldn't help be arise in his heart. In this way, wouldn't Daoist Wen Xuan have become my junior? He's senior to the Wanderingcloud Sword Sect's Master. Inferred from this, then when the Sect Master of the Wanderingcloud Sword Sect meets me, he would have to address me as Grand Ancestor as well…

faith:1

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In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

"Ye Mu Xi aku duluan, kakak ku udah jemput. Maaf ya" ucap Xan Xan tak enak hati, ia menghampiri pemuda yang menjemputnya membawa payung. Ye Mu Xi mengangguk kecil.

" The rules simple , We play these cards to play Poker. You can do whatever you want except fighting. "