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yes but it is unilateral but not on the part of the mc
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some japanese novels are tapped and if u want examples i can give 2 many 2 count
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The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.

Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?

For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
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This story must be a happy ending for azian and kara

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