WHISPERS OF THE FORGOTTEN HEART - Reviews

An idiotic story, idiot MC and no depth of character design its like an over simpathic japanese otaku got transmigrated in a chinese novel and then doing what **** they always do there is system tag but nothing of system in volume 2 in volume 1 MC just use system for acting cool no use of brain and a lot of moral bull****ing

Feel free to rate and review.Thank you!Had to do this to promote it??????Anyway this is my first novel so there might be some mistakes but although the story is an original work of me.However it'll be kind of you if you will tell me my mistake in the comments so that I could come over it.

Xin:"nothing at all I swear"

A Sword of Justice.

     'What happened to me?' Filled with fear and reservation , he could only wonder what other changes the unknown creature made to his body. With that thought in mind, he found himself flinching as his grandpa opened the door and stepped into his room. Quick as he could, he rushed to put his tunic back on. If his grandpa discovered what that thing did to him, there was no telling how he would react. He couldn't help but remember his grandpa's comment about the hero.

-Yeah, I am ok.

"But I'm the commander, the head of the criminals. I need to keep a confident and rough personality, their sanity depends on it. Imagine a scary cat, insecure leader, would you follow their lead or look for someone more trustworthy?" The blonde whispers in the younger's left ear, putting his hand in Jimin's hips and pulling their bodies together slowly. Jimin was frozen, Yoongi sometimes did touch him in several places and being really intimate, it never really bothered Jimin. Actually, it made Jimin feel some kind of way, he couldn't recognize the feeling, but he would always shake and get nervous when they would get really close. Jimin's response was to stay still, he didn't know exactly how to react since a situation like this has never happened before with Yoongi. Jimin gulped; "I just know that I'd follow you anywhere, and do anything you tell me to do."

-Kiss. My. Feet.

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And all that glitters is gold

one of my dream books that I always wanted to read. the plot seems interesting and is really detailed too, also main character is a type that I rarely see (a character that truly is a monster that follows their own instinct instead of staying with human morality but monster body) the only problem is while reading I saw some word errors like missing sentence or a wrong usage of words English is not my first language so I may be wrong on that.. overall it's really good story but not for soft stomach imo.

It's good enough till now.Kaaj is LLC of so if do is do is do is go is so is do is so is do is do is do is do is do her usual daisy Japan Japan sadist galaxy jay half year of Ka is Ka Ka so