hope the locked chapters can be read in other sites . Cant afford to pay for the chapters cause its alot from where im from. Thanks for the reading experience though.
One of the worst novels I have seen in a long time. The author did a complete disservice to the concept of the novel/synopsis, since those sounded like they could be interesting
Balanced pacing. I don't feel bored yet I don't feel exhausted. I just hope that there would be more chapters uploaded soon. Thank you. Congratulations author!
Great Story....................................................................................................................................................................
you HONESTLY have a wonderful book right here? why aren't you updating it? I don't get it?? your're writing is fluent and fluid enough to pull your readers into it, and even the prologue was caused a spark of expectations. the events and chapters so far are well paced with their own mysteries, and I have every reason to believe you could make a truly successful novel from this. a word of advice from a fellow webnovel author; on Webnovel effort pays. consistency is key! if you truly maintained a consistent update you would be featured and your novel would gain more exposure, even a contract offer isn't far off the way i see it. all it need so far is a good book cover, the synopsis and prologue are good to go in my opinion. a nice cover, and your're set.
"So how are they?" Mr. Colin asked Jack while they watched the kids repeat a training course. Jack shrugged slightly. "An answer would be great Mr. Nine."
