Whispers of the Astral Crown - Reviews

I love the story plot, the way the MC create new skills, almost everything is fine, except for all the guild matters, how is even posible that all the guilds are "famous" and they have ranks like general, colonel, lieutenant and they guild didnt even exist or at least they are not created yet, thus dont make any sense, also they talk about pro players but no Esport from RML exist, the way that you are developing the guild matters are like the way described in the king's avatar, but there, they have an Esport for background, there is no way that every player know from which guild belong which player because the guilds are not created yet, you can say that you are from X famous guild and they have to believe you, this do not make any sense, also every guild member act like a Chinese sect and is so boooooring in that way, we want a story about a cultivator in a video game vs normal people or even skilled people that are a world champion in X martial art or X discipline like archery or something like that not another wuxia story with boring sect things

It should be called reincarnation of simp. 1st his master called him or prepared him for suicide with the nine tailsthen he helps out some girl for good reason only to become a simp laterTotal pushover, thrown like a ragdoll between headmaster and by whole family of the girl he saved. Even the 2 girls he saved the elder girl just hide her face even though they just willingly became slave/subordinate to mc. She just refused him to show here face. Even after knowing mc's skills forging and otherworld skills. What did they do beat him up for no reason. Pressure him everywhere from father grandfather elders and even youngsters. And mc happily gets beaten around. Chanting they are good people inside. From the repetative illogical stupid encounters i have been bored and irritated. Also he has a unique hybrid fox spirit but guess what its nerfed. and he goes around in his porter uniform even after he became a student. that didnt give him better treatment tho.Waste of time

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'Yes' was her only reply and the screen flashed out of existence. Only to then be replaced by another screen.

Meanwhile, outside the village hall that they were feasting in was a huge pile of bodies scattered all over the village, it looked like no one was going to bury them soon.

"I'm late" she said as she walked through the door. She knew the party started hours ago. The whole place was packed with people.

What a nice shield she had found.

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School of Contemplation

Opening the big door of the temple, a large dust bursted out from the inside like no one's been here. An abandoned temple. The torches were off and seen some skull of birds I did mentioned and human skulls scattered everywhere. Literally. Also thick dust visible everywhere: columns, floor, and wall. Cobwebs are also visible in the high part of the temple, also insects are the only occupants of the temple. The ceiling were made of thick green foliage and it's very amazing, no wonder why insects occupied the temple.

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