whispers of a sinful heart - Reviews

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

This novel is one of the best I've read in a long time.  Destroys patterns and the main character is also smart and not a slave to the system.  But the novel is very difficult to comprehend and the main character is psychologically broken.  I won't continue reading this but I'm glad I saw it

"Sheesh, these guys don't feel like going anywhere? The hell they staying here for?" (Chai)

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[Grade] Lower D

Dia sangat berterima kasih karena kami telah menemukan Ayahnya, memberikan makan dan memastikan dia baik-baik saja. Pihak keluarga dan dia sangat panik pada saat itu, ketika mengetahui pria berumur 88 tahun itu tiba-tiba saja menghilang dari rumah.

Still, having fought Orochimaru before, he knew he had his limits, and the boy was coming pretty close to those now. It would not be long before the sannin sank his sword into his chest again.

- This googles make the mission easier sir.

Me:well 8 killed 12 so her it is

"He died."

"Master, we are being watched," Mogrok informs her quietly.

"Lalalallalal...lalallala.lalaaaa!!!!."she sing.Everyone look at her.She become the attraction of all people around her.'Oppss!! I think I sang it to loud?? Hahahaah!!!whatever.!who cares!!'.Some of the people feel annoyed and some of people feel stupid and some of people feel funny.She's up to her school.