Whispers of a forgetten love - Reviews

MC is gonna become a Villain...........Truly gonna be a epic story, can't wait :_: ..................Another OP MC.I Am really  gonna love this story I a sure of it....................

Story is meh, interactions are forced.Fir example: bold agent guy says your wife is a fox spirit.MC be like: Okay.….Bold agrnt guy: that dude is too clam send more people to observe him!Bold dude’s Boss then is like: He is not ordinary so therefore we must recruit him!I can see the strings in this novel so I’ll give it a One star in Story developmentCharacter design is meh so 2 stars.World background is 1 star as the spirit group government agency is like the rest of the novel is very poorly thoughtout.

we still have time to next weekguys let's rally and gather support from this novel.the suspense is killing me and it needs to get translated for the greater good of humanity

She nodded towards a pair of guards standing outside the main server hall and directly walked towards her Queen-mother's study to bid goodbye. A group of helpers followed her as she adjusted the coordinates on a sophisticated bangle on her wrists. A small portal opened to transport her and her helpers away, watched by her Queen-mother at the side. Aila promised to assume her role as an excellent ambassador, bringing honor to Neverwinter.

What is he talking about?...

"Sounds interesting."

"Correct. You've passed the test. Congratulation!" I catch his hand, and he pulls me back up.

  back to my story.  how I became the leader of all these delinquents.  it simple really, all I did was beat them to submission.  as of now I have around 20-30 followers.  I'm currently 15 years old about 5'6"" black hair like all Asian.  

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the book has a good, i am looking forward to reading more.