Whispers from the Served World - Reviews

Please update it been so long such I great book and I love the first 2 and teach me

I know that the setting is like Nano Machine but he doesn't actually have a system, its just that he got the abilities from an A.I and has super perception type stuff,  its not as overpowered as it seems and its actually really entertaining.The world building and martial arts are extremely similar to Super Gene, besides the other world part of it, the technology and the way humanity is across the galaxy is similar, and the martial arts of super gene are easily some of my favorite in the way its portrayed and explained out of most of any of the novels I've read, this definitely has the potential to be one of the greatest novels on this site I highly recommend.There are a few typos or confusion of if something "is" or "is not" but it happens like once every third or fourth chapter and is very ignorable, no nationalism or anything, I really hope this one gets picked up.

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The story starts off pretty well, doing a good job of introducing the plot and some characters (that at least feel real and have some depth) as well as relevant information about the world. I noticed a few errors in writing, be it tense or singular / plural mistakes, this could be an issue with translation(?)

its not all that bad but for me it slowphase sucks i dont like love seperation thingy and system is so useless might aswell dont have concept and idea is awesome but plot progression is bad 11 chapters in gave up there might be peaple liking this book

Leaving Way with no choice, but to fight it alone since the other villagers were no match for the might of this gorilla.

"I couldn't have possibly known you chose Daisy instead of Marigold or Jasmine!" He protested. "It was five in the morning! It's like the world wants to hastily finish unholy business during those times! ...I did find her at one, though."

Sky:' I'm only here when there are partys and when it is weekend or vacation but when I'm home I fly a little bit and some other things. '

If she can obey the instructions I gave, I will give her the pleasure that would make her faint

"Give me only five minutes