Whispers beneath the willow tree - Reviews

Why do you keep it in Trial read only to remove it? It was the most supported book yet it was not picked and you guys picked some shitty novels. I really am thinking of leaving this platform...... Why just can't you pick this book?

So far at Ch. 60 of Trial Period, this book is one of the good one. Worldbuilding is good but still veiled by mysteries to let the MC explore.The pace of the story is not bad, despite the title of "OP" it is not that outrageous of OPness that comes like Plot Armour in most 'you-know-that-kind-of-book' but with His own hard work too.MC has a good head and he used it well.The System is not that annoying like most Video Games books.And no Harem in case you are worried about it. I hope this book get picked, Ciao

Great book so far loving the plot. So may plot twist can’t wait for more chapters. I still can’t believe some of the lines I don’t want to give out spoilers but the book is mind blowing. I really love the protagonist as she is female. I live the way she is strong and independent.

I love the storyline, I love the characters and I love how he respects his parents and he is an honest young man. I highly recommend that people should read this story. keep up the good work.

Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order...One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times.Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :]The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!

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"Wake Kenji first, he fainted."

Unexpectedly, a distrait cry pelted his eardrums. Rogue turned abruptly to see a small child, none other than his little one, racing for him with her face glazed in tears. The titan quickly bent down and guided Mikasa into his palm, the girl hugging his hot flesh in desperation. Before he could place her with his other little one, Rogue watched as she suddenly pointed afore them. For a moment he was confused, his mind still slightly foggy from panic. After a few gratifying seconds, her demand came clear to the titan. He looked up and saw something that made his blood run cold and his body still in shock.

Something came over me like I was so shy and nervous, I had the butterflies in my stomach feeling.

MC > Kryptonian+God = Super OP ?

"Sorry for all the trouble. See you around."

Only shooting stars break the mold