While It Lasts |18+| - Reviews

What’s happening?

my old eview seem to be gone, anyways more discrepancies, 4th sister Ye Chan, always made bad meals or mysterious meals that was avoided by Mc and the other sister. sudden ch 390, they said Ye Chan always made good food but little under cook due to impatient. Seem like author restart story or copy another check in story around the ch 378. cuz Mc bought clothes to go check branch danglong in jinling. however he seem to been to that branches multiple times, so why employees don't remember him

I like the idea of this novel. Good concept, I don't usually read game novels, but I think I will be interested in going beyond 40 chapters............................

この小説はかなり良いです、この小説が大好きです??____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The dude does not know how to spell and add punctuation, worst of all it just makes the story line harder to understand! Like come on just get a translator or something on the lines or that please dude.

Spectral Eye of Soul Flame

"Well I won't pressure you into talking but if you need any help I'm here. We are partners after all... Well its only the firs time that we are working together but still.... I mean we are colleagues.....Well You know what I mean."

"Shénme?(what) From who?"

Unbenonced to the two of them someone heard them what will come of this is anyones guess

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Author please keep writing ???

Didn't make sense not to live for fun