Where the sun meets the moon - Reviews

This is a very good story, well descripted and developed. love how the author is attentive go show the world background. I know for sure this story will Do very Well??

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Very entertaining. It is fast-paced and may not be suitable for all readers but it doesn't involve a lot of clichés. Read at least until ch10 before dropping!

This is Malignant, the rewriter of this book. This book was originally the work of Condemned, but due to certain reasons, he placed the book on hiatus. Now, I got his permission to continue writing this craft. Why did I rate it so low? It's not because the book is subpar or mediocre, but because I want the book to start at the very bottom. Only you, the readers will tell the quality of this book. Of course, I hope that before you guys decide to write a review, you will take time to read more than ten chaps at the very least.Anyway, I will leave this review here to indicate the new start of this craft.

The story itself shows lots of promise... The execution of the story is poor. Many opportunities for good storytelling go ignored or get glossed over. If this is taken as a rough draft and got rewritten it has the potential to be a really good story. Just not in the state that it's in.

slow paced story be back around 399+ chapters! the story is to much detailed to be read with only 60+ chapters available.. I don't want to waste time reading this one until I'm sure that the author will not drop it mid-way! added to my library

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I actually liked how well written the grammar and the word choice were. I also liked how realistic this is. The only thing that I don't like is the mc himself. why? reason one, he got kicked out of the reincarnation circle because of love... like come on. Reason two, his personality since he is too kind and too naive. dude he hed reincarnation 360 times and he hed seen a king touring children and women, yet he did nothing but he still couldn't hold himself when an elf is getting raped. ??

i just want more updates, and also I can't wait to see the character reference displayed here in the app, the original ones you shared in discord were so cool.

'Why does the Heaven test my grand-daughter so much, if this was the reason then why was she even born with the eyes of the world if the heaven is just going to try and kill her.'

I signed a promise to do so, and then placed my hand back on my lap. The entire time Maxine had been talking, Mom had been silent, and nothing had changed in the water. It felt comfortable, but nothing seemed particularly magical about it.

When the blonde haired boy stepped out of his apartment, a mischievous grin on his face and carrying buckets of paint; some with paintbrushes sticking in them, going to the academy was the furthest thing from his mind.