People say it's a pretty good novel to pass time but why on Earth is the m named Dark Demon. Why is demon a normal noble family name. Why is his first name dark? I thought dark demon was just the name of one of the demons and was expecting a light demon and a fire demon but no dark demon is just the mc's name. Should've just named him Damian dark or something similar if you wanted him to have an edgy name.
Edit: ok I was pretty harsh on dark demon but white gawd is f'ing hilarious. Completely broke my immersion. Stupid name but funny stupid.
to be honest, the English in the story is awful, sometimes there's a female pronoun when it's supposed to be male, some sentences straight up don't make sense and sometimes the punctuation is off