Where do I go from here? - Reviews

I'm loving the book so far Xavier is a jackass

its a good read except for the severe lack of info.author Id ask someone to proofread this              thanks

I completely loved the story especially because my favorite person has a relationship with Mc. please come on author we take out chapters you are reading keep reading in a webnovel.But why does it cost you so much to update a story for 3 years, 3 years without updating, please have mercy, I beg you.

(301) Very underrated!The beginning is rather underwhelming, with a setting of a world full of the common Eastern Fantasy. The Martial cultivation is so spread that it is used in what seems like boring everyday life and is presented much less majestically than in renowned fighting series. Pacing also feel slow for a long time.That being said, the story and everything in it constantly improve, exhibiting a broader picture that is carefully thought of. It's still not just about fighting, but the rest is just as fascinating and the comedy on point.I can keep saying a lot of how I bit by bit starting viewing this light novel as the hidden gem of Chinese fantasy light novels, but I think I said enough and from here can only recommend others to give it a patient chance.

I really like this game. I hope it gets more updates and that it gets through the voting system already. I want a mass release!!!! Though the premise reminds of the Prodigal novel, it's very different. This novel has more depth and personally, I think a lot more thought and research has gone into writing this. A system novel executed well!

A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5

Its a nice read but it neads heawy editing.it's realy raw. There are a lot of details that i cant be sure what it is but if you edit it a bit i can write you a good review.

Dragar spoke once more " listen carefully brothers for we are going to war". Dragar spoke a few words and the hearts of the two kings lit up with excitement, it was the first time the king spoke to them about going to war in a very long time. " Our target is the port city of Torgoth to the south west of Xar" Dragar said with a grin.  Akkan couldn't hold in his excitement and had a smile across his face, he was holding in his laughs as he thought about scorching the lush lands or Xar. Akkan was tired of his boring lands of never ending barren wastelands and volcanoes as far as the eye could see. He lived in the volcanic wasteland of Dracar a brother continent to Xar except for the odd fact that Dracar was in the shape of a Fire drake. Akkan's mouth began to water as he thought of all the Delicious animals and dragons that live in Xar. Akkan wasn't the only one excited, beside him was Dagorn who was equally excited as he sung a sweet song to himself. " I am Fire, I am Death, Xar oh Xar Face my Wrath". Dragar could see the excited faces of his subordinates and smiled, he let out a deep laugh that shook the ground, he too was excited.

Xyrus:-_-

Meanwhile, Arthur is engaged on a 2 on 1 battle with Silver Knight and the other warrior carrying a greatsword.

The announcer's voice reverberated throughout the establishment. It was accompanied by claps and cheers from the audience.

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