When The World Went Still - Reviews

I like it but I give most stories five stars so mu review means literally nothing so meh? Anyways its kind of cool with a good plot and interesting characters keep it up I like it and will read.

Apart from the parts that are left unexplained which give some readers a hard time understanding the book, I would say that the book is awesome! the plot is sell defined with interesting premises. The grammar is okay and simple to read.

I am hooked thoroughly ❤❤❤ First chapter and I am in love with your book dear author. You are awesome, dear author. The awesome storyline, awesome characters, awesome writing style, awesome imagination. everything from the start is perfect. The Lady in red and Elena's lost memories. The dreams she saw, wow, it was great. The way you introduced your characters in the second chapter was the best intro ever. I loved everything about your book dear author. I highly recommend your book. it is must read.????❤

As the clock strikes 10.24 PM, the group finalized everything.

In this situation shouldn't it be the other way around?! Why is he the one embarrassed ?! For some reason he felt as though he lost something...his dignity as a man among men...

And so they sent in Naruto. But that just probably made it worse.

Should I update this?

      Ojo answered, " Yes, that is the reason I told you she is a goldmine, she is not beautiful but whoever marry that girl and treat her as queen will move from favour to favour until he is on top of this world, if not that you have been talking so much about her I would have gone for her after that revelation"

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

my life is misserable,no ones teaches me to give all my life to a person i love thats why its a kind of easy to me to just change myself and destroy someone that my mother once try to me..but do you know what!i didnt let it happen cause i love my sisters that she would left as if its happen.maybe i dont know what is love but it doesnt matter as long as i made my rule in my own and do what is i think the right...now she just leave with my younger sister named christine and just wanted to be closed with me?is she joking me!!those years where i neaded my mom,those years that i need someone to make me realief,the years i asked why does it happened all to me,why they leave me..when caelle was back my kom just leave and do you know what!!i dont know what is right that time and i asked for gods help and asked him

I Honeslty really like it but you need to fix the grammer, at some points I’m straight guessing what ur trying to write. Other than writing everything is dope hope the story continues for a while .

review for event fp don't mind it lllllllll