When The Stars Betrayed Me - Reviews

Nice, please be selected I cant wait for more.

there's no need to write a novel if you only update the chapters once a month, it looks like you really don't have the intention to write a novel, trash authorI will appreciate you if at least you update the chapters every day and be consistent, the problem with the story plot and your grammar which may be bad is another problem and still get a good star from me

I belive this story is around a 4 out of 5.,Mostly because of the lack of explaining something’s, such as you stated something about humans being enticing, and the mc would feel pain from normal food..But then it was not mentioned again, at least not mentioned to around chapter 60..I’m not sure if it gets mentioned, but I’m assuming not..But either way the story is great but a little slow..

HmmmHloo everyone I hope you guys alll like the story so far I am always Making necessary improvements in story so you guys can enjoy it...As you guys have already noticed I have changed the name of the storyThis will make the story more interesting as far as I can see so I hope you all love the story and as I have already announced volume 3 will be released after one week now only 5 days are remaining

The story is very good to me and I enjoyed it but I hope that the story will be released soon so that there can be more chapters to read.

Xenon:(humikab)opo ate...nagugutom na ako ate Maymay:ako din.kakain muna tayo

There would be wine, if the Beau could possibly manage to procure it. And perhaps a couple of scrawny chickens, stewed until they were almost edible. After dinner, the officers would gather around the fireplace of whatever building Wellington had commandeered as his headquarters to sing carols. They would probably be forced to wear their   woollen uniform capes against the damp that relentlessly seeped in through the stones and chilled to the bone.

'Say, is he really a kind person? His gaze just now was so scary. In his messages, he had always been a gentleman to me... I...I... was that all pretense?'

Lin Zeyan glance at them lazily.

"Hmmm ...." Writerz looked annoying as always.

This concept has a lot of potential! The opening line about human nature is thought-provoking and sets a dark, introspective tone that fits well with the theme of ambition and madness. The idea of samurai seeking a demon blade to rise to power is intriguing, blending historical elements with supernatural mystery. To make it stronger, consider adding a hint about the blade’s curse or the personal stakes for the samurai. Why does he want to be emperor? Overall, it’s a compelling premise that could explore the price of power and the danger of tampering with forces beyond human control.

The story is good and the first few chapters were clear. The way the mc is made is good. The way you describe the situation is good and the slow burn pays off Continue author !