When Sunshine Dies (2nd version) - Reviews

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Raw: 我从战斗余波中提取属性1 star for TL quality. They changed the mc's name, from Chen Mu to Cory. It sounds very cringe to hear this in a cultivation novel. Also, this book is very boring to read. The only good thing about this book is the concept where the MC can increase his strength by staying near the place where people fight. Other things are very very boring.

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Really like this MC personality tho he's too cold to his friends sometimes but still goodStory is pretty good and power system is interesting also especially the soul weapons power

The author here with a totally biased reviewI've wanted to start consistently writing a story for a while now, so I'm trying to use this as a way to motivate me to not only write more but also improve on things such as grammar and style.I'll be trying to get this story posted at least once a week and with a goal of 1000 words for a page from now on.So thanks to those who stick around to see me fling myself at writing and hope I hit a bullseye.

I eventually found the book I was looking for. Taking it, I headed for my seat before using it to reference my work. When the period was over I headed for my other classes.

Sitting on her bed, he pulled her closer to him. He run his fingers through her hair. Looking at her bit mark, he suddenly frowned.

"How could you say things like throwing away your life for me so easily?" she asked in a frustrated tone, her voice muffled.

However,

Manong driver: pero ma'am baka mapahamak kayo

[Ding! My function are "Store" "status" and "quest"]

Deskripsi: Kemampuan untuk melemparkan mantra ke segala arah tanpa menyalurkan melalui bagian tubuh dari jarak 100m atau sejauh yang bisa dilihat Gamer.(150+ 250 bonus Base MAG)