When Shadows and Death Consume - Reviews

This is a Zombie apocalypse novel, And there would be many mistakes and wrong grammars. And I'm shameless for reviewing myself with a Five-star rating.

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Translator pls. i need this. Pla translate. is this dropped? Hiatus? I need to know these things or i will literally die a horrible death...

This is just horrible. The author puts zero effort into the chat group itself. Why? Because under the chat group facade this is actually a R-15 harem building novel. The MC becomes ultra wealthy and influential via his chat group (he gained $700,000,000 [700 million] in 3 chapters) which he then uses to woo and seduce 'Heavenly Beauties.' How does this have so many 5 stars reviews?

Summary sounded amazing until you lost me at simp, how can you ruin such an amazing idea with the addition aspect of "SIMP"dgnfgnfgnfgnfnfgnf

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Hahahah my harem story returns muhaahah hurry now reach chapters 21+. Its such a great story u can't help but love it. Men bow before me. Women gather under me. For i am . Lvl6

I really really want to like this novel. It is well written and the characters aren't too bland even though they don't matter at all in the next arc.But there are some key problems that make it impossible:1. The second short story (simulated life) within this novel is a festival of cliques and not interesting at all.2. Face slapping is a sport and while the MC doesn't always take the first opportunity to do it, it will always happen in the end.3. There is no red line, no overarching goal for the MC to achieve.4. The system by itself is reducing any stakes to almost nothing. I don't mean for the author to add something stupid like, immediate death or destruction of the soul, but there could at least be monetary losses or some kind of debuffs. 5. The author drags on and on about unimportant stuff, skipping chapters is sometimes the only way to still gain a modicum of enjoyment.

The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.

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Start of the book is interesting. Hopefully FL gets her revenge as planned ◡̈

  "Ouh, pity you." May laughed a little. Henry grumbled. "Then, what were you doing here during the holidays?" Henry sighed. "That ... It does not matter to you, Michael."