WHEN I CAN CONTROL MY FATE SOMETIMES - Reviews

The writing quality of this book frightens me. I know English isn't the author's first language, but it's as bad as google translate for the 33 chapters that I've read. This book seriously needs an editor. Any editor that's well-versed in English and above the mental age of 14 will change this book for the better... or at least make it less excruciating to read.The story is quite a cliche, but I like the genre. I've only read a bit, so I can't say much, but it's pretty generic and monotone for a start. I can't see much character design. MC's backstory is very overused, and side characters only stay to the side. World background is at least interesting. It's always the world background bringing up the entire genre. Likewise, I only read this novel to immerse myself in the genre. And I only write reviews when novels are either extremely good or downright bad. I hope the author makes the plot exciting and hires an editor so I can continue to read and give it a chance once more. I'm forced to stop reading at 33 chapters in.

This is my second zombie apocalypse novel that I'm reading and honestly it's good but the mc should learn to trust people more even if it is only a little bit that's what I think though well it's really good you guys should try it

not worth the read. The grammar and spelling is horrible and, shows no sign of changing or editing. It is this low level of quality that makes me avoid most new works that look great in the narrative but is destroyed by unprofessionalism.The background was not bad but is very hard to comprehend some times. it might get better, but it simply couldn't overcome the lack of care exhibited in the writing.Hopefully, this story will be revised in the future.

Just realized I didn't rate this...But just try it out! It gets much, much better. This is probably my favorite novel. You won't regret it!

I have never been into this kind of stories before so I thought that I would leave it hanging from the first chapter but once I started reading it, I was proved wrong. To put it simply, this book was  very interesting and.. original! It was well thought of. The character design, the story development and all the other details screamed 'Get hooked on me!' So, hats off to our talented author!

i am in chapter 22 right now and what i can say is that the mc is a man that don't care about using others to reach his goalsbut what i don't like is that when it come to his grandparents he become like a kid who hasn't seen the world like cmonImagine the man who lived millions years and slept with countless beauties to blush with the mere mentioning about a girl in front his grandmotherand he get very emotional with them and that's fine but at least act like your age manAnyway I am only on chapter 22 and so I hope he won't keep acting like a kid with themThat's only my opinion if you don't like it you can ignore it just thought about writing itother than that the story seems interesting and so far i liked it. i will read to the latest chapter soon and i will write another reviewNote : English is not my main language

"Complete the Varmala ceremony love birds" Uncle Vikram said with slight smirk on his face. I feel redness on my cheeks. How embarrassing.

Anhil could do nothing but watch Old Man Golden run. His last ditch effort to kill Old Man Golden had been foiled it would only cause him to recover for at most a hundred years and the cost was too great. The pain experienced when burning the foundation built up in cultivation was beyond comprehension especially when it entered the soul stage at that point the very being of the dragon would be destroyed. Anhil had cultivated from a young age and met many difficulties.

"Chidori"

"I guess that Wench of a cousin can be scot free this time, but if she dare to harm my son, then Hmph... she better be prepare!

Solange-san, who'd convulsed with wide eyes, was now appearing to have a carefree smiling face as she slept peacefully.

There's nothing to be afraid of. Just calm down.I forced myself to remain calm. It was being hard to stay calm in the last month. In a few months I would be married to Edward Cullen and I would be perfectly happy.