This is not about cyberpunk 2077 Just so everybody knows. Mc Just gets thrown in a random world and needs to compete against players or something. And he needs to find something to change worlds? The whole story is confusing and Just throws you in the action. Its like a fanfic where we need to know the world beforehand. He gets a crew but they are some sort of Ai and self aware. Mc Just meet with 2 People from the crew and then gets sent to a race.
Some chapters are too short.
The grammar is good.
World building is done poorly
We have no characters designs.
Story development is Fast. Maybe too Fast.
Updating is Fast, but that is to be expected from a New story.
