What Should I Do If I Time-Traveled Forty Years Later and My Lover Has Become an Old Man? - Reviews

What Should I Do If I Time-Traveled Forty Years Later and My Lover Has Become an Old Man?
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So far the mc looks like a disgusting side-kick character if you don't read from his perspective(seriously you should considered this before refuting me),and the author forced help to make the mc backround more pitiful and humble doesn't help much. For example the cab driver has been trying to be nice to mc but when he got off after he got that battlescouter(dbz rip-off) and look at the driver stat he just mock him for being a piece of crap?! Also the storyline is just a wish fullfilment of someone who doesn't(it's so obvious) suceed in his university life(like a vault of money,a mansion of hot top 5 chick in university and some loli and milf),too forced to make it look like a modern xianxia novel(which it isn't).Yeah i admit i doesn't into much harem plotlines,but i did if it doesn't affect the plotlines and revolve around mc getting more harem member as the main objective(what are you a pokemon trainer or something?)
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I don’t read novels much, but yeah this one looks promising. I think I found a gem hehe. We need more chapters.Keep it up!??.............................
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can you please send the raw link? I haven't read it yet but the synopsis hooked me on. I hope the translations are good or at least readable enough.
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This gets five stars from me for a number of simple reasons:- The writing is on point here. Transitions are smooth and nothing is rushed- Doesn't rush too much despite being a short story. The writing allows the  build up as to what would happen next- Got some good showing and imagery going on. - This is a finished and completed work.
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The best story of the month, No, of the YEAR!Very good and detailed, enjoyed every minute of it and will have to recommend it to all my friends!!!  /Exp lover
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The story has some good potential. Good idea even if its a bit cliche, its quite entertaining. The problem is the leveling system. The level range from the kingdom the hero was summoned at was so far away compared to other places like maroon city. There should have been a clear "Max level" if you will or a level range of people at the apex of strength residing in that world but what you see in the story is one kingdom having people 1-100 while other cities have people 4000 and up in levels. Its sounds so weird. If the author had given the level of usual knights or kings and court mages maybe then it would've been fine or if the level range would have been more logical.
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Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
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Was a good concept but the fast pace of the system and the mc not even using the system most of the time is dumb as f*ck. Like bruh he has tons of things he can easily get from the system with those points of his yet his not even using them, and he literally has millions or billions of lottery tickets(if I remember it correctly cause I dropped this some time ago) and he isn't even using them instead he's just using thousands at a time instead of millions like what the f*ck? It's like the system is just a design in this story it doesn't even exist.
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He sat up on the bed, scratched his head, and then turned his gaze to the window.
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'Alex!?.. are you trying to scare me to death' I sigh
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"yeah, we will be boyfrind and girlfriend for now"
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" minumlah ini , biar kamu sehat "

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