the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable. Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.