Warcraft Lord - Reviews

Holy crap reincarnation novel that the lover follows him? DAMN      dats pretty goodNow git filled up to 140 characters

Its a great novel with a great character development slow and steady. No rush or something with a detailed plot , in the end its a novel worth reading....

The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers. I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother. An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^

One of my favorite genres ☺️. I won't give a five star rating 'cause we don't have chapter 5 and more to read ?Can you please upload more and don't leave us in the dark for ever? ☹️. It fits the real genre - thriller! Yay! ?

August 30: Now I know why the guards didn't ask questions, She's actually one of the founder of the Island..... I have stayed here for a long time and learned alot of things. So without my parents consent I transferred....

Volaris Familia, the guardian of The Temple of Jupiter.

No side was willing to back down. The Elite boar still has a lot of hp because Jayce only kept kiting it, but it seems that the battle was leaning in their favor  because of Stephen's 2 man kill.

"So? Did you get your permit?" he asked.

"Yep!" Gin announced smiling slightly as he took a few steps forwards going back into a rhythmic motion of one foot after the other as he dragged the carriage. "About a year ago I got bored of cleaning up trash and decided to wander around. That's when I noticed those signs with those things on them. You call them numbers? Anyways I just kept following them and accidentally found my way to the next floor. Then I decided to just keep going." He shrugged as if he didn't know what else to do. "After I made it to floor negative fifty a few people began to discuss people called fighters. I asked them what that was and they explained the floor system!" He smiled slightly. "Though I don't really understand it. It kind of goes above my head." He laughed as he scratched his head sheepishly.

"Okay, I don't know exactly where she lives, but she lives on a mountain. Can you please let me go?"

He raised his hand, about to check whether he could open it or not, but before he could touch it, the gates started opening on its own with a heavy sound. The dust accumulated on the gates shook and fell as it opened with grating sounds.

Rachel sat at her desk and huffed. She didn't feel like working or doing anything for that matter.