War Online - Reviews

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Fuck, the female character in this novel pisses me off.

It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time.
For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor.
Mc cash -> his dad is reach.
Mc power -> he knows future.
Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount).
Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will.
For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality.
There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet.

I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all".

Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).

Hello, Author here. As stated in the summary, it's the story of a guy who was sent back into the time before the game released.
A few points that readers should be noted while reading.

1. MC is an average player in the past. He can't know every other event and thing that present in the game. And he isn't a genius gamer either. So, there's nothing wrong if behaves like a noob sometimes.
2. The story will not be focused simply on the game. The real world will be involved as well from time to time.
3. MC ends with only one girl. There might be two to three love interests but that's it. Not every girl who meet MC will fall in love with MC
4. The starting 26 chapters are rushed without many explanations. We can't do anything that already happened. I haven't explained about the game or his background properly. I will take it slow and explain the terms on the way.
5. MC is indeed a Villain and has an arrogant nature and very selfish. But, he is also someone with a good heart.
6. The update stability is normally 7-10 ch/week. Depends on popularity.
7. I'm not sure if I explained all the important points. If there are any other doubts, leave a comment below.

At first I thought this novel was going to be a cliche-breaker. For the first time ever I had though we - the audience - will be reading a story from the perspective of a character who is usually the mini-antagonist (2nd generation wealthy heir template) but as the story progresses the MC slowly but surely reveals himself as typical Korean hero template 101.

Why even bother to integrate the mafia aspect when it plays absolutely no role at all. The synopsis hinted at greatness; the story failed to deliver.

In starting chapters, some players reach lvl 50in 1.5days (3 days in-game) is looking a bit extreme to imagine what would levels be after 3yr in MC life. will they reach lvl5000 or in 3yrs.
I think author never played any RPG genre games although it is fantasy it is better to use low levels for narration of story.
like reaching lvl 10 after 3 days in-game.

This book starts off well and continues to get better as you continue reading! Cant wait for the next chapter.............................................

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writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site.
stability of updates - very frequent
story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero.
character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see.
world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough.


its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.

This is a good novel. The characters aren't too annoying. The writing quality is quite good. No grammar issues. It's good way to pass some time

I cant read more in chapter 40 and i cant find it in other sites
This looks good so please author fix it or maybe post it in ********** or something jut let me read it because it locked in chapter 40 and above