War-Mother and the sin of gluttony - Reviews

Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader.The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day. Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development. Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well.The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels.The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless.The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3

I recommend other to try this. It is really good. I am desperate to read next chapters.

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So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess.This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it hasThe story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on.The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear.Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for.Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess.World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building.Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me

Bro it’s actually really good. I love the storyline so far. But please, do me a favor; work on your grammar and spelling. The grammar is quite confusing throughout the story.

at the beginning , the story doesn't sound interesting but as the story progressed mc cultivation become profonund that's when it's interesting . especially around 700 chapter up, when mc dream into a world like modern world and Begin his live stream martial art and gather Netizen attention to cultivate heavenly merits. recommend Reading.

colbob was really super strong colbob who introduced himself as lord of the lord of the universe

"The reason why he wanted to perform this ritual is simple" She finally continued. "It wasn't just for my obedience. It's because the bond would have made me worship him. It would have been far more disgusting."

   Tiberius was sleeping silently in his cave after he had just enjoyed a nice Rock salamander lightly roasted and seasoned with salt. He was dreaming of a beautiful pair of black wings that stole his heart from him whenever he looked towards them. He also dream't of great sorrow and death that forced him awake. The mountain shook once and then again until it was on the scale of an earthquake rocking the land. Tiberius still dizzy and sleepy tumbled out of the cave to see whats happening. In an instant the smell of blood filled his nostrils and woke him up completely. He looked all around in a haze trying to track the smell when in the corner of his eye he spotted a large cloud of smoke rising from Torgoth. Tiberius Let out a Ear deafening Roar  in order to attract the attention of the other dragons living around his mountain. he continued to roar for about thirty minutes and had gathered about about 1200 dragons including a beautiful Black dragon Named Helena who also happened to be the queen of the Black Dragons. Tiberius regained his senses and began on his flight towards Torgoth to see what was happening there and to save his people if needed.

Oh before I forget, the Indians! They talk in English, but they have a very different accent. It is very distinct to them. Most of the Indians who go to San Malo are looking for friendship. Well basically because they talk to almost everbody.

I'm standing in a dark alleyway the building next to me is my Target the group inside the building are gun Smugglers These are one of many in Gotham this is the biggest one already took my money now I got to make sure they stay down for a while I wait for my opportunity there are two guards outside the door and someone just came on a motorcycle.