Excessive wish fulfilment, without logic. Stupid decision to justify plot.Eg. Sell pill > make easy money > plot demand lack of money (for capsule) > Make stupid reason to get money when he is still loaded (25k in account and need 1k). Somehow trying to justify situation. I tolerated this novel to my limit. I just cant continue it anymore.
I wouldn't recommend novel for people to read. I guess this is authors first novel, cause inexperience is felt while reading this. While premise could be interesting, lack of any research about america and police give novel too many defects at start. e.g. crossing the border with mexico while vaulting over the fence/wall (most of us mexican border in 2003 didnt have fence/wall and texas-mexican border is river), also promotion to detective just cause of good combat skills, or detectives having uniforms. Also instead of Sherlock type of detective, you get a Rambo in a police.
if you like the typical "lets get strong together, while i lead the pack" genre of novels, this is the right story for you! If you DONT like that type, then it isnt ?
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"now then, you guys better get on and take a nap or something as this will be a long trip of 12 hours" said the pilot as he started the engine and Rex, Grant, and Mika got on the helicopter, put the seatbelts and started watching outside, just to see how they moved farther and farther from the ground until they could not see anything but clouds and the great ocean
