VRMMORPG: The Other World Online - Reviews

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Sorry for any grammar mistake or spelling mistake that I missed .

I have always wanted to write an original Gamer story and this is my first attempt at it..

It's a good VR game novel with a Female MC. I have tried to make the world building real and logical  Thank you for reading the story.

I expected a cliche mmorpg book when I clicked on the title but this book has really exceeded my expectations.

It really has become my personal favourite and the concept of discovering your Qi through a game is seriously an unique thought.

You are really amazing author.

Quite interesting. There's already enough world building in the first 2 chapters that you could already get the feel of the world view of the characters.

Also the concept of Qi being discovered through a mutation is interesting. Qi has always been a concept that is capable of destroying worlds in various novels, and yet Qi in this novel seems like it's just a means to make life easier and live longer.

Already a novel with great potential.

definitely worth your time

If there is one thing that I can say it is that Anji knows her characters.
they read well and despite fitting into the typical character types, they have personalities that many writers try to give their characters and fail to do so.

it started off with a bit of an info dump, but since then it has been smooth sailing.

overall the world is pretty simple and easy to understand,

great work author keep it up

Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!

You have got to  read this novel
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Awesome !!!
The world background was fascinating and intriguing.
Narration was awesome too.
loved it and would recommend others as well ..
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Great story

I actually love the premise of the story, and the concept you used for Qi is also a unique one; especially when used in gaming :). I would love to continue reading this story and also get inspiration from you while I am writing my own xD.
Lob you, author <3

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First of all, I really love the new cover of the novel. The plot was very interesting since the first chapter (although I'm not good with the name of the character.) but the writing is very good since it was detailed and easy to imagine.

I am truly amazed by what I read and I am glad that I got to read it. The story isn't that complicated like other VR related stories that just drives you crazy with all  the terminology.
I really liked how Xiu step by step became strong, conquered her fears and walked onto the path of changing her own fate.
I will be looking forward to more and sincerely hopes that her path will be smooth even though that is impossible.
Rooting for more and keep up the good work, author.