VRMMORPG: Olympus - Reviews

Hello! I am the author of this novel!
I rated my novel based on my opinions and since I am a newbie at being a writer, my grammar is going to be messy so just comment about the wrong grammar on the paragraphs or something like suggestions.

The story development is kind of fast but there is always an event that will occur in the future.

As for the character design, I think I did a good job too since I planned this thing a very long time ago. Like the MC's messy personality.

As for the updates, I can notify you if I can't update for a day or two. But it is somehow... rare.
The schedules are always one chapter per day at 00:00 or midnight.

Lastly, for the world background. I feel like I am interested in it, too.

This novel has a lot of potential, but like most novels on this app, it suffers from a lack of proficiency in English. Making an overall pretty unbearable read for me.

If semi-broken English is not a problem for you, give it a try.

I leave this review because I really like the novel. I like the story, the characters, the game and many more.
I know that I can't do better review. So, I'm sorry if this is not helping.

Nice story. Pls update more..

Loved this book, i couldn’t put it down was a fantastic story with great characters. I completed the book in less than 24hrs as story line kept me gripped from the start.

Well, when will you update?