Vow to Heaven: A Villain’s Rise - Reviews

I truly love IET's novels. Personally his work with laws and breakthroughs are fantastic. Strangely, he is known for his grand and expansive worlds but i feel the starts - or maybe the early middle - of his novels are the best. When people first start training in laws but it hasn't reached universe breaking levels. Anyways very good novel with a friendly MC and cultivation system which is unique and although the sword stuff is reminiscent of Desolate Era its a bit different. I do want him to do another elemental one like coiling dragon next though.

This book is one of those you can't stop reading. The synopsis made me want to read the book and when I started the book, I couldn't stop myself. The story is written so beautifully and each word compliments the other. The storyline is so captivating. Good read!

Now, when I started reading this novel, I tried so hard not to complain. It's just feels so rushed. Like the first 5 chaps are like wh-what so he dea- but now he's in the hospi- and eait hes killing people no- and it's yyyyyy. But cough cough, here's how I feel on the novel. MC : it's a better then average MC, like 4 star range. World backgrounds average, but it'd a bit early to say that. But as I know my back, I know NOTHING interesting, or well explained. (Maybe thats my fault as I was confused for info dumps.) STORY : Is again but still to early for reader to get thr juicy bits. And thats a very bad and basic review of mine. (Probably the former)So all I'll say untill a 100 chaps later is, slow down and explain ur stuff, add ways to show the viewers transitions, or just dont make ne miss somebody dead in a line. I look foward to what Mr.Author will bring.

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writing quality 4: to many misplaced comedystory development 4: averagecharacter design 5: pretty well thought and interesting charactersupdating stability 4: averageworld Background 5: give enough information to be interesting but not enough to predict what's gonna happen

At this point, and for the first time in the night, Randaru had a curious look in his eyes. "Yes it's beer. You are dying, but instead of help, you want some beer?" he asked, with an increasing interest in the situation.

    "Baiklah."

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"So.. What genre?"

HP: 20 (2 per minute)

Let's try to meditate and concentrate. Let's sit and relax, my PE teacher told me breathing is the secret for proper relaxation. Okay breath in breath out, I remember that fruit has the same look with Ito Ito No Me when I played Roblox. So I stop my nonsense meditation and just point my finger on the ceiling and try to imagine a string and now I can see a fascinating thing. A very thin thread connected to me that I can control easily. Imagine my surprise when a 10 strings/thread shows up connected to each of my fingers and then connected to the ceiling. Then an amazing idea comes to my mind. I jump then tried to swing like Wrecking Ball while singing the same song all over the room which was a bad idea since I am in a small room and did not notice the door that was opened by my aunt a while ago almost wreck my balls literally. Good thing I have this spidey sense bullsh*t and reflex. Hey don't judge for doing that swinging and singing that song, I am just doing sane man do. I am just trying to gain some semblance in a world full of infinity cr*p, excuse my language. I really admire those people who got Gamers Mind when they were ROBbed from the earth and was transferred somewhere in the Multiverse.