Visfall - Reviews

a grand total of 110 kids !!! ......................................................................................

Easily one of the better cultivation novels on here. An interesting thing about the novel is that it tries to break some of the tropes and conventions that are standard in this genre by literally having the MC travel to a different country to avoid cliche arrogant young masters. Even moreso, when the MC eventually encounters a traditional cultivation sect he remarks at how backwards and inefficient it is. Its a bit refreshing to see a story try something new. After a while though the tone changes drastically and while it isn't a bad change, it's actually quite suited to the setting, it does lack a bit of the oomph of the first arc.That being said, the characters are done badly. For all the research on the U.S. culture/political system that the author actually seems to be mostly accurate in, the behavior and lexicon of the American characters is really...Chinese. Other characters are one dimensional and there are also the standard characters who might be interesting for a few chapters only to be forgotten about quickly.Overall, it's definitely worth a read for daring to break convention though it's not the end all be all of cultivation novels.

I can't believe you actually makes a summoned hero trope! I've been waiting for you to make one! Finally!

Well.....I am more interested in author profile picture   than her nove....... Basically I'm not in this type of novel.By the way 5 stars for an amazing profile picture also don't forget to tell me which anime this is from

I love !!I sincerely hope that it will be chosen otherwise, I will make a nice fireworks display in my neighborhood, nobody will die ...., maybe not .

Woah!!! a unique genre enters webnovel and I am so excited to encounter more of what will happen next! I think it just needs some modification when it comes to pacing and sentence structure? XDKudos to the author! ?

WOW! I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL! HUZZAH! The synopsis was really funny, in a good way. It made me laugh and entertained for the first few chapters. I cannot wait to read more about ALEXANDER'S GREAT ADVENTURERS HUZZAH!!

Your writing is very enjoyable to read. Easy and smooth chapters that i can blaze through without too much of a hurdle. it isnt choppy either. The story have just begun, but the idea can blast off into many different ways. i love scifi stories.  Keep it up!

Armando was close now, so much so you could smell the cheap cologne and a burnt out cigarette. It was almost blasphemy that a kid such as him made it into Nallen Academy, a place for the top ranked academic kids in the nation, or at the very least one of them. Even if he did smell like shit, he was smart. The gold grill, the tattoos, and the accent might of thrown some people off, but no, I knew he was only a few ranks below me when it came to academics.

Alan yelped, and flailed around, trying to find the speaker.

I hope you will update soon..Pleeeaaaaase????

I glared at her coldly which immediately placed an impish smile on her face. She's enjoying this.