too much talking when fighting, and I dont really like that, poor grammar, and lacks of information.I could only read until the "kidnapping of lily, by squall" chapter, because it was written so poorly. Without update stability, this would only be rated 2 overall. But because I didnt really finish it, I'd give it a 5 for Update Stability. Prob gonna comeback in the future, but for now, Im just gonna read another one.