Had high hopes on the novel. The synopsis was encouraging as well as initial chapters . But then things quickly went downhill. (dropped it on about chapter 30).
- Unnecessary extras. What do I care about the name of each of the 9 fingers of the villainous organization and what they look like. What does it matter to me that one of them attacked the office of local heroes and got off with heavy losses. And moreover, I don't care about a detailed description of his fight with the hero Porcupine.
- The weak emotional part of the work. In theory, given the circumstances of the hero and his ability, this should have become a pillar of the work. But no, this point is almost completely ignored. (The fact that this work is generally from a third person only makes the situation worse)
- Battles... what a masterpiece(no)... the hero is beaten - he flies away from inpact (unscathered). Beats the enemy in turn. If the enemy is weak, this is the end. If strong - enemy enters a new stage of his strength and the cycle repeats ... (and yes, according to the precepts of grandfather Madara, no one starts the fight in full force).
- Spoiler. I read the last chapters - the hero says that they defeated the gods and he himself became a god... it strengthened my resolve to grop the novel...
- And yes, romance. I usually have both hands for it in any work... but here it seems more pulled out of the finger than anywhere else
