VILLAINOUS SYSTEM: I am fated to be a villain in a fantasy novel - Reviews

Writing is good! I wish it updates more often but, we should not pressure author-san!? ehem... I hope there's 100 advance chapters(Whisper). BUT! I must WARN you! DO NOT read this or you might regret it!!!... if you know what I mean, message this review on what regret it is!?

Interesting at first but after the novelty wears off its bland. This story depends too much on the "system". It provides almost everything, I do not even think the chef even cooks properly, it might also autocorrect mistakes... maybe.The main character is uninteresting, lazy, and should never have been the main character in the first place. His struggles are first world problems, he doesn't care, he is only a tool to "cook". Everything was spoon fed to him.The main enjoyment you will have here are the reactions and face slapping, but after that, you will start to see the problems. A junk food story, there is little development, background, or design to speak of but it scratches the itch.There is also a similar, basically in a different setting, story here albeit there are hundreds more yet to be translated.

sigh I can't help but think all Chinese authors are masochists.... could you imagine ex. *my father raped my wife but from his perspective he was horny and I have a hot wife and he's blood all must be forgiven* sigh this is why I hate tragedy genre most Chinese authors do it wrong.

Interesting, story I want more.???????????????????????????????????????????????????

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Nice story, and i would like to say it was a pretty good read and i was glued to the screen my entire time. Hope to see more future updates.

It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.

    I could see why they called it the "big gym". It had to be over five hundred yards in length, with a swimming pool (including a diving board, with the, at least twenty treadmills, three gyroscopes (for some bizarre reason), a sand pit (presumably for long jumps), an archery range, about a hundred barbells with too many weight sizes to count, a popcorn machine, including other things. All within the Space Base.

  "Correct. What else?"

"You guys hung out at a bookstore? How come I didn't know about this?" Nick asked, upset.

I ignore it and went over it.. i saw some flowers that looked like the flowers in the video. I gulped and continues following the path and I saw a field of flowers and I could not believe my eyes..