Villain Retirement - Reviews

I started reading this two days before this review and let me tell you, ive binged all 288 chapters currently released. This novel is so far my favorite Novel on this entire platform. The brilliance of the Background, character development, and overall the writing in general, speaks leaps and bounds of wgat separates this masterpiece from the abundance of writing on this site. There are no info dumps and the characters pasts as well as the worlds past, come gradually and are expertly implemented inti the story in an ebtertaining and shockingly perfect way. Also may i commend the author for writing the mc so well. You by far made the correct choice in making the mc so edgy, it solidifies the uniqueness and masterful complexity of the novel. The plot twists constantly keep me on the edge of my seat and reading for hours. The chapter length is perfectly sized to not be too long nor too short, but right in the sweet spot. I am personally very excited to see what you will do with Hanah’s charcter. I could go on and on about how perfect this novel is but i will never explain it good enough to do it justice, just know that you should read this. You will not regret reading this absolute masterpiece, but keep in mind it takes time for the development of everything, but you will see how that only makes it even more perfect.

Pretty good so far. Interesting enough plot and characters. There are only 6 chapters at the time of this review, but the novel does have potential.

guys guys guys. its a hidden gem, trust me. I went in with low expectations, but this is truly a good read(i know, a rare occurrence on this app).

Somehow, author manages to make the edgy mc not cringe(mostly), and, the comedy hits. Whether it be poorly named superheroes or actual jokes it manages to make me laugh(also a rare occurrence on this app).

give it a read, also, give it say... 5-10 chaps before deciding if you like it or not. That was enough time for me to like it.

Getting some my hero vibes if Deku was an OP serial killing psychopath.  So far I like it, I am also wondering how the MC’s family history ties into his psychopathy. Keep up the good work author!

No, there are situations where I can accept that a novel is just not for me but this isn't one of them. This novel is objectively not good, it's riddled with so many plot holes and inconsistencies and even the author himself stated the story should've ended 100s of chapters ago. I'm not saying it's wrong to enjoy the novel after all everyone has some sh*t novels that they like but you don't have to pretend that it's good

Here is my opinion after chapter 59:

This novel is among the bests in webnovel. I can guarantee it. The story and character designs are the very best. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't Gary the best ever?! (readers will understand me).  

The writing quality needs to be improved. The author messed up the pronouns quite a few times... by that, I mean her/him pronouns only. Other than that. A more consistent update would be better. At least 1chp/ day, so webnovel standard is reached. That's all the flaw I can say.

The characters in this novel are so fleshed out. You will feel the difference between this novel and every other novel on this website.

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As of chapter 310. Writing quality is great. I think the dialogue is smooth flowing and realistic to the setting and period.Desctiptions are also niche, there's never too may unnecessary adjectives. I really love the story and there's lots of mysteries to be uncovered. The characters are easy to imagine and very diverse in appearance and personality. The powers are cool. I really like the main character. I think he's a really interesting one. I don't really know how to articulate my thoughts on him but yeah I like him and I am also fond of the supporting cast. All in all I think this is probably top 3 on the platform.

At the time of the review there are 6 chapters. and I like tho story a lot and think it has a lot of potential. I am really interested in the brother sister dynamics and hope it will continue to be developed.

tbh I didn't expected anything much from the summary but when I started to read it, i was genuinely surprised by how good this was. The Comedy is on point as well as the Simple yet complex characters not to mention it have the best character relationship and parallel I have ever seen in a while (talking about Riley and Scarlet mage). everyone should atleast give this a 1 chance.l

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Caught up with this, it had potential, the first 300 or so chapters were ok but it goes downhill like halfway through and the last 200 chapters especially after the multiverse sh*t are dogshit. The story just feels like an author padding out something that should've ended 100s of chapters ago just cause of money. Overall a 4/10 from me