Villain of my own novel - Reviews

Hello!!

First off all I very happy and pleased to seen an Indian Author, as I am a fellow Indian myself.

Hello, Eshwar here, it is officially chapter 200!!! Yay!! When I started I didn't think much about my novel, now I have come to love it and it is my second millstone!! All of the interactions have helped me a ton, though I don't know how to say anything else except thank you, and again my head is filled with spoilers so let me know how the novel is please, then until next time [Peace]
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for all the comments, you may not know but they have helped me a lot to continue writing, so again thank you very much.

Hello people, this is Eshwar, it's now chapter 303, the genre has changed to Weak-to-strong, this is my third milestone!!! (Woohoo!!) I wanted to post a review yesterday, but I forgot, till now I realised that the story mostly contained things about the MC Eshwar, so I am learning of how to give more depth to other characters that are directly or indirectly related to the MC, this my first novel in which I have learnt many things, for which I am extremely thankful for the novel and you guys, there are still a tonne of things that have yet to learn, so while I learn and grow, hope you guys enjoy the story, thank you, thank you, thank you (for your mind, body, and soul), thank you very much, the story will get interesting from here on (more interesting than before), thank you for reading, hope you enjoy reading, and as always,
[Peace]

If you came here for a villain( a real villain) then please leave as this is not for you and me. Cause this is just another anti hero. He kills other villain. So calling him villain is far away. The Arthur should change the name and remove the villain tag as it misleads the people who want to read real villain.

Hello, Eshwar here

If you are here, please give it a try, it's good(I think) and I'm still trying to improve, so I'm sure it'll get better.
thank you for reading.

Hello, Eshwar here. Due to something happening I kinds stressed out about it and the story had started to awry (not exactly sure how you feel, but I just feel like I added few fillers here and there), so from the next chapter I'll be back at my own pace, their won't be any noticeable changes though. Anyway, just wanted to let this be known, thank you for reading and. [Peace]
ahem, I have posted this in the recent chapter (Ch: Changes) it is just a copy and paste with few new words, anyway, hope you enjoy the story.
thank you for reading.
[Peace]

The way author keeps on switching perspectives and repeats the last chapter at the beginning of the next one makes it difficult to read.

It's makes novel read so bad that I can't help but feel like it's purpose is to farm word count.

to be honest the novel is just pure confusing to reading I won't recommend reading it

Very confusing, and hard to follow. I tried very hard to enjoy what I was reading but...there's too much not explained or brushed over to really feel the story

Synopsis Tell Nothing About The Novel
Synopsis Is So Long But Don't Tell The Reader Nothing But Gibberish
What World Novel IN ? Don't Khow

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