Villain Hiring: Help! Author Wants Me Dead - Reviews

First and foremost i want to tell you that i binge read this up to 50chapsAnd trust I was frustrated beyond reasoningWhy? *Spoilers*I don't like Mc - He always lead by his nose, Author tried to make him too realistic that he forget when he passed the border of reasoning No romance or so even upto 50Even after interacting with 6 or 7 potential harem girls (or so the author portrayed them) his relationship with them doesn't increase a SINGLE BIT!He cut his ties with his two friends girls who are indicated to be in love with him in early chaps probably after getting frustrated or so the first girl loves him deeply but she cucked him and the second girl probably likes him but she does with his best friend jet and acted like nothing wrong, His fav Ms.teach already has a lover and he starts ignoring her, The strict Student councler is a slut in a real sense so he after an event he starts using her as a stress relief that's it, The girl who helped him from suicide starts showing some signs of "trouble"(that's what most probably author tried to show or I misunderstood which I highly not) before she starts distancing from mc,His step mom which also shows sign of getting 'flustered look' when he comes home early which shows she is also in 'trouble' but she didn't tell,Finally Mara the delinquent who falls for his previous self or something like this but then she starts leads him by nose in every way possible even though she loves him she still shows signs of 'trouble' and I don't know what author trying to do in ch42 that irked me SO MUCH she gets drunk and her two friends girls starts taking advantage of her body and records it before sending the mc (that vibes the disturbing ntr) after that the mc like always gets frustrated and cut ties with her because of that video late at night on phone callOverall this novel overly uses the raope and unwilling se.x trope and most of all it all happens with the every female character that interacts and makes a some bond with the mcAnd also he doesn't do anything to jet who spies on his pc and phone and betrayed him giving those access to the strict councilor who uses those access and erased the evidence that can result him to be expelled from the college which is a great deal to him and he acts like nothing when he meets him like SERIOUSLY Author if you want to make your novel more realistic you have failed really well and even after reading 50chaps the mc doesn't gives a damn to those who related to him and I'm... disappointed in himHe knows everything thing but still..  If author wanted to give an excuse that these all girls are "just potential harem girls" and not official then please let us know why wasted Up to 50chap this doesn't explain anything at all... just a disappointed reader

The story is pretty much sh*t to me as the talent that he got is wayyyyy too op , its pretty much a bug honestly . I mean the protagonist can pretty much turn a sh*tty weapon into an op weapon , thats fine for me but the thing I can't accept is the cooldown of the skill . It only have 3 minutes cooldown which ridiculous . Not only he can increase the rank of a weapon but he can increase the rank of a skill and his class too (so far I have only read that he can do both of these but based on the description of the talent he can probably do more than these) .

I usually love wish fulfillment type novels but this one just felt so... dull. If you enjoy slice of life you might like this but this ain't for me. I feel like I'm reading a face slapping novel but the only face getting slapped is mine for expecting anything to happen.I really enjoyed it until the author tried to introduce some sort of relationship development in chapter 10 using some cheesy plot that felt like it was copied straight out of some movie. I don't think it was particularly bad, but I just felt it unfolded totally unnaturally.At this point the hype died for me and I realized there's literally only two characters in the novel that even mattered, as if the other characters exist just for the sake of it. The injured teacher and other students who were helping were skimmed over in a few paragraphs without dialogue and even the MC's ex appears when he's on a date for no reason and has zero interaction or significance.So far, it just feels like the MC is going around flaunting his own wealth to himself and that's all.

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"No way silly! Besides I already locked it. So  you need a password to open the file."

"Counter it with Protect. "

I looked at him astonished and worried. "How? The hell? Whaaat??" I was so confused. Liam didn't stop talking, he kept talking and Noah stayed silent. "He's going to get what he gets for not listening." He talked for hours on end, not eating, sleeping, or even drinking water. We started to get worried, "Hey Liam, come and sit with us! You haven't even talked to us in a while." We looked over and he was still talking, but all we heard was mumbles and murmurs. Elijah goes over to him, "Hey c'mon, we're worried, you've been on the phone fo- HOLY SHIT!" Elijah immediately tries to separate Liam and his phone. Elijah pulls the phone from his hand and there are black strings or a substance that is sticking itself to his hands and the phone. Liam looks at us and he has the black substance leaking out of his ears. "Let me talk." He says and it leaks out of his mouth, "ELIJAH GET AWAY FROM HIM. THIS IS NOT HUMAN." Leah yells. Elijah gets the black stuff all over his arm. "Oh fuck. Uhh, last words.. I wish I didn't die a virgin?" He screams in pain as the black consumes him. They disappear after the black left them with nothing but their phones on the ground. "We've lost three people. Seven of us are left. What are these things?" We look to each other. We're scared, not that we already were but, "I don't think this is just a bomb." Noah grabs the phones and goes to the stove. He burns them, we hear the crackling and faint screaming of Liam and Elijah when they are burning. "Are.. They inside the phones?" Noah nods. "They were going to die anyway. They weren't going to contribute." Leah starts crying, "Hey it's okay, its okay. We're going to be okay." Jacob comforts Leah. My dogs come to lick her tears away, they're so sweet. My babies are so cute! I will do anything to protect them, and my friends, but mostly them. "Lets go to bed." I say, everyone goes to sleep. Honestly it's pretty peaceful than what I would have expected. I woke up, late. Everyone is up already and talking with each other, scared and timid. They're already discussing if any others are going to go. It's the second day, Tuesday already? Tomorrow we have to go out for supplies because since we're harboring now seven people, food and water goes out pretty quick. Thanks to Camila we have a large supply of water bottles because that was the first thing she went for in the house. "Hey, you up yet Ellie?" Jacob says. He was one of the first friends I've ever gotten, closest too. Been together forever as best friends. "Yeah yeah I'm here. What's going on?" He crouches down to get to my level, "Well. Tomorrow is the supply run.. If you can find it, can you get us some candy? Or ice cream? It won't last long and who knows if the ice cream is melted or not but if you can, please?" He looked at me with puppy dog eyes. Now I know puppy dog eyes have never worked on me before, not ever. And this was no exception, but I'm going to do it for him anyways. "You know puppy dog eyes don't work on me Jacob. I'm still going to do it though, just for you okay?" He looks at me excited and also a little bit pissed, "You know you don't have to treat me like a child you know? I'm only 2 months younger than you!" I know.. I still love to tease him though about it. "Hey guys.. How about since it's been about 48 hours, I go up to the actual house part of my house?" They look at me, "I'm coming with you." Jacob says. "Fiiineee, are sure you're not going to be scared?" I say sarcastically, He rolls his eyes in amusement and lightly punches me, "God, if anything I'm older than you mentally." I open my mouth and shout dramatically, "Oh shut up!" I punch him back, he laughs and says to me, "Okay okay. Fine. Are we going to do this or what?" I nod, "Let's do this. Who knows what we'll see out the windows."

He sighs and walks away from the white snake new nest. Guess they talk too much about those kinds of the book in their room.

I loved this book! The characters were really unique, and their friendship made the story special. The elemental powers like ice , water and  fire were super cool. It was inspiring to see how brave everyone was while fighting the bad guys!"

what a nice novel .

Hello! Author here!This story has a very interesting worldbuilding and system, I have a lot of things planned for this world and we are just starting, if you keep me company I'm sure your will mind will blown!!This is my first story, I'm a new author, any support is very appreciated!

First review i'm doing for a novel that I actually think is good!I have my concerns about the future of this novel but so far (chapter 77) 6/4/21Everything is pretty good. World building is very nice, and the story has some mystery to it making you want to find out why things are happening and what will happen.But for concerns it may be way to early to tell but I hope these concerns are fruitless.Mainly all of my concerns are of the main character.It's been good so far but I fear of him being just a 'tool' for the novel like others novels like the sovereign of judgement. The MC in that novel had 0 character development through out the entire series which led me to drop it as he was just bent on revenge and nothing else making it boring. This isn't a revenge based novel so it's hard to put into words but I do hope we see character development and actually make friends and not just subordinates like the novel mentioned above. and cares for others outside his family. the novel I mentioned the MC felt like a tool just to push the novel forward I felt 0 connection with them and their lack of character development.MC so far is getting pretty OP which is fine because the author doesn't make the mistakes other authors make I noticed. In that they make a story just about the MC getting more OP and having plot armor without anything to add to it. The author introduces MC to other characters and their backstory to the MC. But the con there is that besides Brandon and Sergei the other characters feel very weak to the story so far. Dante is an alright character so Ill say besides MC there are 3 other characters that are interesting. I don't care much about the siblings but the author posted in a comment his brother will receive character development which makes me hope for the best but I hope he can do something to make the sister more interesting in the future. story doesn't feel slow paced nor doesn't it feel fast since we are only on day 3 out of a 90 day period which I hope we can get a time skip or something as I can see the trial world get boring after a few hundred chapters assuming it continues longer than that. But I could be wrong author has proven to be quite capable and when other beta and gamma's are introduced it could make the trial world interesting again. This is author's preference naturally but I hope he adds a love interest to the story in the future as I mentioned about connecting with a character romance can be considered the easiest and cheapest way yet at the same time IMO the best way to form a connection to a character. The MC is already playing match maker for his brother I just hope he gets his own love.And on the note of love interest I hope the author makes the love interest(if there is to be one) interesting. Make them from a different race, or make them an enemy of the MC but then they fall in love. Those romances are for some reason hard to find but are the best again IMO because they can make things interesting. a cliche and boring romance would be like the MC and Andrea fall in love or something. though hopefully their not made to be a damsel in distress in which the MC has to find the princess in another tower thats in a galaxy far away. Also the MC feels like he's only been in one tough situation hopefully the author creates more challenges for him even though he is currently pretty op.Last two things that give me concerns are the siblings and future of other planets. Starting with the siblings they give me the feeling of the MC siblings from I eat tomatoes Swallowed star novel. Where their all geniuses and made the world feel a bit cheap. I honestly have no idea how to fix this but hopefully the author can throw challenges for them where the MC can't interfere to flesh out their character and lets the readers like them instead of them riding on the coat tails of the MC. So far they show naivety about the trial world maybe do something that makes them feel fear, or have a rude wake up call would be really nice.lastly small thing I hope the other planets can content against earth instead of everyone bowing down to MC. even with the monster invasion I doubt planets will just group together to help each other out. I hope there are things that can pose a threat to MC and earth. Again it is way to early to say whether or not these concerns are going to come to fruit because so far the author has done a fantastic job and shows improvement of his writing. I just hope nothing causes him to drop this novel because it's really hard to find a good novel to read these days that are interesting.Wish you well in the future author.Also one more pro is that the author is kind so far and doesn't treat their readers like garbage unlike other novels I read on this site which caused me to drop due to not wanting to give money to support people like that so I hope everyone who reads this gives it a try and supports the author. I'd gladly pay to support this novel and author in the future if this gets monetized