Villain: Gouging Out the Heroine’s Spiritual Eyes at the Beginning - Reviews

it's the same old cliche faceslapping with worse grammar well I will delete this review if I find it better as I read on

Weak world building.Lots of cliches.The MC's motivation is a travesty.Supposedly motivated by making money in the game, but he has never once actually tried to figure out making money.Has a part time job and that's supposed to support him and his 'non-biological sister' (yes... another sister not related by blood)He doesn't seem to have any angst over this once he starts playing, it's just tossed to the side as more women line up around the MC.Yes...it's another one of those where women are almost always good and men (aside from possibly the elderly and maybe little kids) are BAD.If it is going to be a harem then the author really needs to put that tag.Someone mentioned how the rules of this 'game' that had only been in existence for 4 years were being used on a MEDICAL EXAM?Yes you have to give the author room but you can't expect us to throw away our brains completely, you need to give a realistic reason or it is just not going to work.Works at a brick and mortar convenience store....that specializes in this virtual reality game? Doesn't seem to make a lot of sense unless it's just for marketing purposes I guess.You can expect to have to suspend your disbelief on a fantasy novel, but the logic still needs to be there.

Typical chines novel.. Honestly its too boring now... Faceslap, everybody shcocked, faceslap, everybody shocked for over thousands of chapter.............................

I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ?sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.

A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author.And one more thing.*Blooop!!!!* This is good.

Is this also a Yandere story'? i honestly want this to be one. I hope so, and if it's just harem, then it's fine also. I pray for the almighty Yandere Goddess to make this into one.

After I sat down about a minute later the girl with the blue eyes ran away crying.  I glanced up for only a moment then returned my attention to the book I was try to find.  Just as I found my book the teacher told us it was time for class.

  "If I'm not mistaken, her name was Ruby." Said Henry. "Yes, Ruby Victoria Thompson." Said Michael. "Wow, her name was so beautiful!" Said Mei.

'may be that black gown would go for the ball' i said.

(makes sense then how you determine how many points i get when i level up?)

As Young Master Gu Zhi asked his question, the door to his room opened and two men carrying a small child with a bag over its head, entered, "Young Master, forgive these slaves, but the other women managed to escape somehow..." These guards were rather worried. The Young Master was known to get angry when his playthings escaped.

A mix of pleasure and pain jolted them.