Velmira's Kiss - Reviews

good book so far, waiting for author to update or complete

This novel finally being pick... Mtl quality for this one is killing me, so really appreciate it for being picked.Anyway, I actually not recommending this. Mc is a coward that wouldn't go out adventuring except when people thrash the sect itself... So if you want to read adventure kind, this is not for you..

One of best trial read. Already updated in mtl and still enjoying this novel. ....... ..     ...........................................................m..mm........

i like this novel mainly because i wanna be the mc lmaoooo. personally, i think its worthwhile your time, hope it gets pickedd..............

First chapter in and I already know it’s a trash quality translation. I should have got the hint on the synopsis when the MC’s name was translated to Junior Leopard.Unsubscribed, banned and throwed it in the bin. Please filter out your translators and don’t just accept random strangers you see walking on the road.

I stumbled upon the book while looking for another good story to read at around nine or so in the evening and fell in love with it.I found the character growth as well as the plot quite enjoyable.Anyone who hasn't read it yet is definitely  missing out and should give it a read!Is it weird to say i literally binge read the entire book in a day ?cause i literally read it through the night and now I am lamenting the fact that I cant keep reading till the next chapter is released.

Reverend insanity is my Favorite novel by far.And I love this fanfic since it has a lot of potential.Good luck and thank you for the fanfic

Tsk tsk, you must go worship Fang Yuan. If you dare screw him over, you are simply courting death. Good work making use of the unexplained lotus people, my theory is that was Spectral Soul and Red Lotus collaborating in sealing the immortal zombie and not provoking heaven will or just an arrangement.

Your oddly specific with height. Trust me the story doesn't need it. Also focus more using words efficiently. I'd try some power verbs to punch up future  chapters all in all its not bad

This book is one of a kind. Totally different from the system books I've read. The grammar is excellent and makes reading super fun. At first, I didn't know where Ed and his grandmother disappeared to until I read your note. If only he'd known how hellish choosing to be a system would be, he would have done to the world instead. I hope all his sacrifices and suffering are worth it. There is nothing to criticize about it book it's wonderfully written and the description is splendid. Kudos to the author.

Man, I had to drop this story.it wasn’t bad until like chapter 10-11 when the MC decides to drop all her secrets and then precedes to say she doesn’t want to tell them everything after she already did.  Stoped after chapter 13 where I couldn’t handle it anymore.  If it gets better afterwards great couldn’t get there though.  Till then it was great, good plot, pretty good MC, and what seemed to be a good plot intro, but dumb MC accident ruined it.

"Big brother Tyler, can I be like you?" Ania asked straight forward looking directly into Tyler's eyes. Tyler was caught off-guard by Ania's question. He didn't expect her to ask something like that. He immediately phoned the others and even if they were so busy with work they leave it all behind and rushed home for Ania. One by one they arrived home and Tyler together with the confused Ania settled in the living room waiting for the others. When all of them are gathered Ania breaks the silence.