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Veins of the Abyss
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5 stars. From the synopsis, I can already tell that it's a great novel.                                                                    
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In the first place, I personally love this novel so my review may be a lil warped. Ok so translation quality is in my opinion top notch such that the more immersed you are in the storyline there is no worry about translation quality ruining it.Update stability, I guess thats the only real problem i got since the quality of the translation is so good makes it feel as though there aren`t enough chapters (realistically though i know am being greedy lol).I love the story development absolutely realistic characters who make the novel that much better and overall engaging.As for the world building its one of the best i have seen crafted, personally its a wonderful novel with boundless potential(lets not even talk about Chu Feng, the Black Yak or for that matter or for that matter Yellow Ox).  Engaging storyline and all in all fantastic read.
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Wtf. Why is this novel here again?☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁
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The story started pretty well, since it's just the beginning, I can say that the beginning intrigued me, and the setting is not bad either. I don't know anything about the main character yet, but I hope that he will be able to survive in this world, given that he has no mana at all, where the world itself tells about the academy of magic.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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I'm so happy when you came back, I read your chapters almost immediately, and I had to say your writing quality improved greatly, so I can only hope this message will encourage you more, and you'll come back again, I'm sure you have your reasons for taking a break, that's why I waited so long to write this, just want to make sure you didn't lose interest or drive
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If the MC doesnt get with Liu Xia imma be mad.                                                                                                  
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I would say that the theme has potential since it's not one of the most used ones. In the beginning instead of meeting Truck-kun we met Storm-sama wich failed to do her work miserably and our mc was saved and teleported to a new world to participate in "quests". My first problem with this novel is the under-developed characters (we seem to get one more companion in each world he goes to, companions that I personally don't give a damn about, except Alina cuz she was the first and the main female protagonist, but under-developed nontheless). Second big problem is the fact that the start and ending of all 4 volumes that I read till now are pretty bad, instead of exploring the world with the protagonist we get 2-3 chapters in the POV of a random character wich we don't know nothing about and get some useless info dump, wich is pretty bad in my opinion I would prefer to see the protagonist view and not some random guy, while in the ending of a volume the protagonist doesn't have time to do anything after completing the main mission he and his companions are instantly teleported to another world, wich in my opinion is a big problem since we can't see any progression in the MC's relationship with his companions cuz they're always in the missions, a 1-2 days vacation after the main mission end would be really appreciated as we could use that time to digest some information about the world that the protagonist is about to leave and get some character development...The Fairy is a problem as well since she doesn't seem to like her work that much, fairies in novels usually have a mischievous personality, this one has one too, instead of giving the information that she needs to give as a Guide she always seems to be giving the information after it's useless or a during a situation that it can become usefull, wich is pretty annoying to me since it gets boring really fast and it's not really a good way to make character development.All that said I'm still enjoying the novel and will probably continue reading it for some time, might come back to change to review if I see it getting better or worse, really hope a few of these points change in the future. **: Since i'm not a native english speaker and it's been a while since I had to write a big text I would like to apologize to the readers for problems with past/present/future situations and other things. PS2: These are my opinions and as such no1 needs to take it at face value :PTy for reading this if you did and Goodbye =)
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Aladin: Demonyo! Ang ibig mong sabihin ay si Lucifer?
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"Thanks" she said.

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