Veiled Kingdom - Reviews

it's just too simple.the character isn't consistent.there is no thrill.the writing is of an amateur who actually tried.i read till the guy reached floor 7 and then it got cringey, boring and predictable. The fight scenes aren't really fight scenes, it's just the mc doing things.

It's literally THE most chinese nationalist book I've ever seen, like the book itself it good, but there's so much chinese nationalism it actually sickens me, if they got rid of it, it would prob be one of my favorites, but almost every chinese author forces their nationalism into it, ruining their ideas and book. I'm not saying other countries dont do it, but they're much more subtle. Like they're literally saying, THE CHINESE ARE THE BEST, DOWN WITH THE AMERICANS, the book is so hypocritical and like every country does the same thing as America but this book is putting it as only america do experiments. Good idea, but chinese nationality ruined the book. Happened to other god books too.

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Tbh this is the over all best book I have read, although it is troublesome to read on my phone and not an actual book I decide to still read, simply because I absolutely love this

Nice novel. with the same universe and the same earth with other novel, it make me curious how this will cross over with doomsday pillar. And i really hope, there will be flash back story about the genie, is it artifact from other outside earth (maybe nephilim), or something that made from magus academy, or etc. hahaha

???The book looks decent and suit my taste. another system and reincarnation, nice nice!!! waiting for the author to post chapters. ?

I have read 6 chapters. The story is developing well. Stability is good as already 17 chapters have been published. Character design is good. The characters, at the moment only 3 have been introduced. Pace is good. World background is the present time (before the Virus in Wuhan).Writing quality is good. I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but these did not interfere with the reading of the story. There is an issue with tenses. Mistakes do happen and the writer may not be able to see them.  I have started to run the draft through a grammar checker before posting it.The story seems to be a gaming story with all those figures appearing. It is different. All the best.

Although some chapters are somewhat bland, I like this novel. Its merits completely make up for its shortcomings.Please update mrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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