Veiled Allegiances - Reviews

It was good at the start but it just got stupid. rushed events all the time. he is always 2 to 3 tiers lower then needed to be. always relying on demon abilities to battle. never meditates anymore. if rushing to increase his mind power for no reason. it’s just dumb at this point and I can’t continue

This story has a lot of potential, but it is all over the place, making it difficult to continue reading. You need to develop the characters and storyline so that it flows more smoothly, as well as correcting the grammatical error. This story had the potential to have 100+ chapters. Overall, not bad

Very exciting and intriguing. Well done Michaela Gates.