Veil System: Running a Model, High-End Escort and Marriage Agency - Reviews

this novel is actually very good is start slow and steady i hope it will be continued and not get stop. please give more chapters on it thank you

Wasnt expecting much as im not a huge baseball fan but this story quickly grew on me with great characters and character development. Probably the best novel on the whole site. Keep up the great work.

This is definetly an unique story to read.I've seen people write System-like novels....a lot of times....but that story is pretty unique compared to the ones I've seen.MC is OP as he should be but he doesn't directly enter a phase where he is invincible and he trains to get this OP so....you SHOULD definetly check this out!

The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover.The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.Apart from this your story is very nice.

I enjoyed reading the first chapter and immediately decided to add this to my library. The writing quality and character description is really good. The same goes for world building. Fantasy and magic are not my cup of tea, but this is one book that has definitely held my attention. Good job, Tales_within_me !

This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in.I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good.Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay.The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book.As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit.The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future.I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.

The story line was great as always and the choice of words too it really makes a great pass time story and it is getting really interesting so keep it up

I usually don't write these unless the story deserves it.  this story is the best I've read in a really long time.  the characters have growth, not unnatural relationships, and just are fun to read about. the j fo dumps are natural. they don't leave you wishing to skip ahead. the world is amazing. as a fan if mythology,specifically Greek, I can't find a better book. the author does amazing work portraying a different vibe with the goddess Nyx. I honestly can't wait to read how this mother figure in his life held him get past his somehow deep trauma. his family, sister and aisha, treat him like a family would. the story is well written, nothing unnatural. I can't wait to see how he handles bianca and Anna. author you will keep getting my coins and votes. keep it up!!

This story is a delicious masterpiece?. I haven't read it all yet, but what I've read so far is a fresh glass of cold water in the middle of the night. it's refreshing, new, and a lot LOT of world building and character development! it's so different from other stories with a charm that'll keep you coming back for more. Not to mention the smexy scenes that'll surely have your nose bleeding ?? 10/10. Some parts may make you cry, others laugh, but most of all you can appreciate the long haired men and nothing more. our free spirit and charmer deserve more love ?

I’ve been reading your story for some while , and I can clearly say it’s an  amazing story . It’s also very captivating . A great story line ❤️❤️

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