Veil over Eden - Reviews

Grammar is good but some math error and word error. Good premise. I don't know if there are novels like this but I'm loving it. I stopped reading Game genre but this one is solid

I like how the female’s are powerful compared to men, you don’t really see a lot of this unless it’s where the female is more dominant or something like a reverse harem, I really like it and it gives me a lot of inspiration. It’s a unique novel idea.

it was a tragic experience but so good. i would love to read more of this. I almost cried while reading this, they all deserve much more..  _______________________________________

"Hello?" she answered.

Their wings are of different colors but the most common ones are brown, grey, and black. They can also have mixed or many colors at the same time.

Maria: I will now start burning spells into your memories, be prepared!

"It's lunch time! Come in and sit down little Kai "(Woman)

At the Sandbar Internet Cafe is the real Doctor Roquette working on a computer as Aqualad stands guard. "I've almost got it," she tells him.

Hi! It’s the author here, and I have a few things to share.First of all, thank you so much for reading my novel! This is my first time writing something like this, so I’m truly grateful for your support.Second, about the future: I’m still in school, which means I can’t publish every day. However, I’ll do my best to release at least one or two chapters per week.Third, I’m not a native English speaker, so there might be some errors here and there. I always try my best to catch and correct them, though!Lastly, another big thank you! And yes, for anyone wondering, I do feel a bit embarrassed about giving my novel a 5-star rating… but it’s not my fault if I think it’s cool, right?Let’s try to make this novel popular!

hi, everyone author here, this novel is going to be my first but i hope you all support me in this journey and enjoy with me a new action adventure fantasy based story.

please add a review guys, thank you so much