Veil Of Judgement - Reviews

I liked it a lot has a great story that I wish I was a part of. If only my phone worked like that. May this have a lot more chapters and cars

A well-written beginning already intrigued, so I read all the available chapters and wasted no time at all. A very worthy novel! Looking forward to the development of the relationship with Chu Yuechan.

Read up till the latest chapter, have to say, I'm glad I didn't vote for this trash novel. The summary was pretty telling on what kind of novel this will be, and I was not wrong. There is no consistency in the author's writing. He writes himself into a corner, then break the wall behind him so that he isn't cornered. Plot is typical subpar revenge types, and from many of the chapter comments, seemed to be a patchwork of other novels too. Says there's no job restriction in equipment, items all appeared with job restrictions. Game only up for first day and MC already grabbed 3 or 4 "hidden" quest? Milk a skill for easy monies. Meet beauties. Meet cardboard "arrogant young master". Meet a good number of "elites". Get noticed by "elites". Assuming MC has been playing continuously because super nutrients, what about the "elites"? 1 day old game, already people claiming themselves "elites" lol. Already there's "established elite/legendary guild". Also, exp needed to level up is ridiculous, must take casual players months to even get to level 10. Losing a level every time you die is pretty stupid mechanic too, a level 99 dying would probably smash his helmet in rage. I also don't know how the author is gonna write out the revenge plot. If he's not going to be bothered with the traitor and just shoot to the top, then revenge plot without revenge? If he is, then what next? Befriend him again to f*ck his a*s hard? Or just be a giant d*ck to an "innocent" guy who haven't done what he was suppose to do? Anyways, typical revenge plot with sides of plagiarism. Inconsistent and flat story, bland characters with sides of ***ism. This author managed to speed up the decay of the story, mediocre novel overall.

this is a great novel and so amazing to read.

  This story has great pacing and writing. Sure, the first 2 chapters were confusing as heck, but everything gets cleared out fast. Not only is the main character great but also the side characters have flavor to them. The world built is rational and diverse which makes it easily accepted and can be immersed in. Emotional scenes were written smartly and not too drawn out. This made it easier to sympathize with the feeling the author probably wanted to convey while not being burnt out at the same time. All in all, a great read. TLDR :  Smart writing, Believable characters. 5/5 stars.

"..well whatever I am going out to get some fresh air if the dorm lady comes tell her I am at the river bank"

"aku pikir hatinya sudah beku" seru bawahan ayah ilham.

An initial release, a Shikai.

Introductions were always the worst, Felix knew this. The process never changed. Shambling into a classroom half-asleep as the teacher awkwardly introduced you to the class. The same confused and curious looks, the same deadpan responses...

staring at the name am like this can't be good

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